Tuesday 24 March 2015

The Fun Fair

The fun fair looks like a vibrant demolition derby with lights that are shining at me like a flash-bang grenade. The ferris wheel is spinning like a V8 super car wheel and the music is a loud and pumping sound that comes at me everywhere I go. The fun fair is busy; people come at me like a stampede of buffalos. The scent of the fun fair’s corn dogs and chips drift past my nose as I look at the whale like ferris wheel above me. Their screams are enough to blow your ear drums. The roller coaster is a fast, fun, hair-lifting ride that makes you remember this moment in time for the rest of your life. Descriptive Writing