Tuesday 24 March 2015
The Fun Fair
The fun fair looks like a vibrant demolition derby with lights that are shining at me like a flash-bang grenade.
The ferris wheel is spinning like a V8 super car wheel and the music is a loud and pumping sound that comes at me everywhere I go.
The fun fair is busy; people come at me like a stampede of buffalos. The scent of the fun fair’s corn dogs and chips drift past my nose as I look at the whale like ferris wheel above me. Their screams are enough to blow your ear drums.
The roller coaster is a fast, fun, hair-lifting ride that makes you remember this moment in time for the rest of your life.
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star 1 i like how you described the fun fair it feels like your in the fun fair
ReplyDeletestar 2 i like how you used similes
roket maby you could write a bit more?
star 1 i like it how it says The ferris wheel is spinning like a V8 super car wheel
ReplyDeletestar 2 i like it how you used similes